tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1114028378756847690.post721715839351923613..comments2023-10-26T05:26:26.345-07:00Comments on Of Thoughts and Words: HELP!!!!Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1114028378756847690.post-7406877782533986422012-03-05T16:53:41.799-08:002012-03-05T16:53:41.799-08:00I had fun reading all of the suggestions. I'm...I had fun reading all of the suggestions. I'm better at looking at someone else's rhyme than writing. But, you've already gotten some good advice. Nice to challenge yourself.Patricia T.https://www.blogger.com/profile/10673204828383998897noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1114028378756847690.post-66784611264788249272012-03-05T13:28:25.966-08:002012-03-05T13:28:25.966-08:00Thank you Brenda!!!!! :DThank you Brenda!!!!! :DMs Saba (aka Teacher007.5)https://www.blogger.com/profile/06953870191367835120noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1114028378756847690.post-23880656184523294052012-03-05T13:27:35.953-08:002012-03-05T13:27:35.953-08:00Thank you patientdreamer! I really love all the cr...Thank you patientdreamer! I really love all the creative suggestions!Ms Saba (aka Teacher007.5)https://www.blogger.com/profile/06953870191367835120noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1114028378756847690.post-45979035193589598812012-03-05T13:26:25.696-08:002012-03-05T13:26:25.696-08:00LOL! I love the 'Boy'es' :DLOL! I love the 'Boy'es' :DMs Saba (aka Teacher007.5)https://www.blogger.com/profile/06953870191367835120noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1114028378756847690.post-35050413982150289642012-03-05T13:23:25.775-08:002012-03-05T13:23:25.775-08:00By golly I think I am just about there!!!! I LOVE ...By golly I think I am just about there!!!! I LOVE you all I just knew I could count on my writing community to lend me a helping hand :D You guys rock!Ms Saba (aka Teacher007.5)https://www.blogger.com/profile/06953870191367835120noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1114028378756847690.post-32717188415531915082012-03-05T13:20:52.428-08:002012-03-05T13:20:52.428-08:00Yay!! aww thank you Karlene and your little monste...Yay!! aww thank you Karlene and your little monster too :D <3Ms Saba (aka Teacher007.5)https://www.blogger.com/profile/06953870191367835120noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1114028378756847690.post-13243206930900587312012-03-05T13:16:14.729-08:002012-03-05T13:16:14.729-08:00How fun! I'm totally not a rhymer either so so...How fun! I'm totally not a rhymer either so sorry, I can't be of much help.Heatherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05130733681254163610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1114028378756847690.post-90823576941343548652012-03-05T13:00:26.353-08:002012-03-05T13:00:26.353-08:00"Listen Kid, I don't mind sharing my room..."Listen Kid, I don't mind sharing my room with you<br />But if we are going to be roommates, lets get one thing straight.<br />No jumping or bumping or big scary noises<br />I need my sleep 'cause like you I am growing and I want to be (or you could say do) great!Brenda Demkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14479603659946625321noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1114028378756847690.post-70188756788108975132012-03-05T12:27:19.056-08:002012-03-05T12:27:19.056-08:00Listen Kid, it's okay that you share my room
...Listen Kid, it's okay that you share my room <br />But if we are going to be roommates, one thing is true<br />No wetting or jumping or bumping or big scary noises<br />I need my sleep 'cause I too am growing just like you<br /><br />Love from the little monster in me. <br />XOX KarleneKarlene Petitthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17910702587514001827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1114028378756847690.post-43443119970835154422012-03-05T08:12:59.897-08:002012-03-05T08:12:59.897-08:00"Listen Kid, I don't mind sharing my room..."Listen Kid, I don't mind sharing my room with you,<br />But if we are going to be roommates, lets get one thing straight. <br />No jumping or bumping or big scary noises,<br />I need my sleep 'cause in the morning I don't want to be late.<br />(thought I would have a go)patientdreamerhttp://thepatientdreamer.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1114028378756847690.post-65412417101010984182012-03-04T23:34:07.151-08:002012-03-04T23:34:07.151-08:00"Listen Kid, I don't mind sharing my room..."Listen Kid, I don't mind sharing my room with you<br />But if we are going to be roommates, lets get one thing straight <br />No jumping or bumping or big scary noises<br />I need my sleep cause in the morning I cannot be late.<br /><br />(just thought I would give it a go)..lol.patientdreamerhttp://thepatientdreamer.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1114028378756847690.post-4011908515700075902012-03-04T16:52:53.487-08:002012-03-04T16:52:53.487-08:00LOL! Susanna!! And here I was feeling sorry for li...LOL! Susanna!! And here I was feeling sorry for little monster! :DMs Saba (aka Teacher007.5)https://www.blogger.com/profile/06953870191367835120noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1114028378756847690.post-11154899050648640882012-03-04T16:39:52.988-08:002012-03-04T16:39:52.988-08:00Listen kid, I'll share my room
But let's g...Listen kid, I'll share my room<br />But let's get one thing clear<br />No bumping, jumping or scary noise<br />Or you are out of here!<br /><br />Just a shot.... :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17655630528649780363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1114028378756847690.post-89777701411616206892012-03-04T16:38:50.704-08:002012-03-04T16:38:50.704-08:00Thank you for the link Moonduster! :)Thank you for the link Moonduster! :)Ms Saba (aka Teacher007.5)https://www.blogger.com/profile/06953870191367835120noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1114028378756847690.post-9966158803142722132012-03-04T16:38:23.389-08:002012-03-04T16:38:23.389-08:00Thank you Jennifer! :)Thank you Jennifer! :)Ms Saba (aka Teacher007.5)https://www.blogger.com/profile/06953870191367835120noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1114028378756847690.post-43650813515308081912012-03-04T16:37:45.924-08:002012-03-04T16:37:45.924-08:00Thanks Arianne! :DThanks Arianne! :DMs Saba (aka Teacher007.5)https://www.blogger.com/profile/06953870191367835120noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1114028378756847690.post-12781137242181434692012-03-04T16:36:34.395-08:002012-03-04T16:36:34.395-08:00Thank you Diane. I have added the two verses befor...Thank you Diane. I have added the two verses before it so that you and other can get a better feel for the rhythm. :) Thank you for that suggestions!Ms Saba (aka Teacher007.5)https://www.blogger.com/profile/06953870191367835120noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1114028378756847690.post-45942266051105068662012-03-04T16:19:53.039-08:002012-03-04T16:19:53.039-08:00Listen Kid, I don't mind sharing my room with ...Listen Kid, I don't mind sharing my room with you<br />But if we are going to be roommates, lets get DISCUSS A THING OR TWO<br /><br />No jumping No bumping No big scary noises<br />WE need OUR sleep 'cause WE'RE YOUNG GROWING BOY'ES<br /><br />?????????<br /><br />Good Luck...!Louise Nottinghamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11795135478225192452noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1114028378756847690.post-10256406013236900372012-03-04T15:21:17.695-08:002012-03-04T15:21:17.695-08:00It would help a lot if you could post a couple of ...It would help a lot if you could post a couple of other verses so we could get an idea of the rhythm and rhyming structure you have created. Right now this reads so much like prose (except for the third line) that it is hard to get a feel for what might work.Diane Dawson Hearnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02230481088873517242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1114028378756847690.post-21899668200332692472012-03-04T15:05:42.385-08:002012-03-04T15:05:42.385-08:00How cute Saba! I had a hard time finding a rhyme f...How cute Saba! I had a hard time finding a rhyme for you but here is a helpful website to look for more rhyming words- http://www.rhymezone.com/?loc=bar <br /><br />Good luck!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10581876204776919003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1114028378756847690.post-47296204932748972372012-03-04T14:56:25.819-08:002012-03-04T14:56:25.819-08:00Try here when you need help with finding the right...Try here when you need help with finding the right rhyme: http://www.rhymezone.com/Becky Fyfehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01595020500346331076noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1114028378756847690.post-25426684498136057352012-03-04T14:52:42.778-08:002012-03-04T14:52:42.778-08:00Listen Kid, I don't mind sharing my room with ...Listen Kid, I don't mind sharing my room with you<br />But if we are going to be roommates, let's get one thing straight<br />No jumping or bumping or big scary boo<br />I need my sleep 'cause like you I am at my growing state<br /><br />OR<br /><br />Listen Kid, I don't mind sharing my room<br />But if we are going to be roommates, let's make things clear<br />No jumping, or bumping, or big scary boo<br />I need my sleep, 'cause like you I am a growing fiend<br /><br />hope that helpsAriannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17010201524640381070noreply@blogger.com